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A few too many commas in that line. Eh?
I mean you could put dashes on either side of βall of themβ potentially instead of commas, but commas also work, especially in more poetic prose. Where would you straight-up remove a comma from the line?
No, that's normal. Might look strange for a native english speaker, but it definitely normal in othet languages.
Could use one more between "Sauron" and "and"