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The original was posted on /r/peerlessdad by /u/LinusLevato on 2023-09-18 21:02:30.
So I’ve been a fan of reading the Red Storm manhwa and Peerless Dad manhwa and started reading The Great Master when I found out the author was the same as the other two and set in the same universe.
I am currently up to date with the Great Master now and I gotta say, I feel like the story telling is sub par compared to the other two titles. Does anyone else feel the same way? I still like the story of The Great Master but I feel like the way the story is told in the manhwa is kinda awful.
A generalized example of what I’m thinking about is how in one panel something can happen then in the next panel with no context we are months or even years ahead in time. And it’s only known that it’s a time skip after reading a whole chapter and they drop a line somewhere saying they’re a year or so older.
A more specific example has spoilers in it if you’re not up to date and I don’t know how to censor my words on Reddit so if you don’t want spoilers stop reading from here on.
A specific example is how first senior brother is with his master and they get the first half of the book and he goes senile. Time skip ahead and we come back and master isn’t senile at the moment and expresses that they have to find the second half of the manual. Time skip ahead and we never get any details if first senior brother and master ever retrieved second half. Time skip ahead again and First senior brother is fighting off tower blood clan assassins or whatever while practicing and mastering the martial arts from the book. Did he get the second half or not? Is he memorizing and practicing an incomplete portion? What’s going on?
Sorry for the long post and rant but this kinda shenanigans in manhwa really irritates me and this kind of inconsistency in storytelling is something I almost exclusively see in Chinese web comics so I tend to avoid them for the most part and the great master gives me typical low quality Chinese web comic vibes.
Still like the story tho. I can’t wait for all the shadow sect comes back for a reunion. ❤️